Wednesday, 5 December 2007

Our Descriptive Poetry

We have been writing descriptive poetry this term.
For the past two days we have been writing poems that compare us to other things!

Have a read of some of Zoe's wonderful writing below:


I feel as happy as an over-excited chimpanzee.
I feel as dizzy as a distracted dinosaur.


I look as silly as a circus clown.
I look as pretty as a purple petunia.


I am as crazy as a colourful cougar.
I am as skinny as a starving seagull.
I am as smart as a smiling squirrel.


I smell as sweet as a serene scent.
I smell as scrumptious as a strawberry souffle.
I smell as breezy as essence of pearl, jasmin and gardenia.



3 comments:

Marnie Thomas said...

I like how you have used alliteration as well as similes. Well done Zoe.

Anonymous said...

Zoe,
You have written a lovely poem - well done!
Michelle (Tom's Mum)

Mrs. Hartman said...

Hi Zoe,
I am a teacher in America and I wanted to tell you how much I loved your descriptive poems. They were outstanding! Keep on writing!
Mrs. Hartman