For the past two days we have been writing poems that compare us to other things!
Have a read of some of Zoe's wonderful writing below:
I feel as happy as an over-excited chimpanzee.
I feel as dizzy as a distracted dinosaur.I look as silly as a circus clown.
I am as crazy as a colourful cougar.
I am as skinny as a starving seagull.
I am as smart as a smiling squirrel.
I smell as sweet as a serene scent.
I smell as scrumptious as a strawberry souffle.
I smell as breezy as essence of pearl, jasmin and gardenia.
3 comments:
I like how you have used alliteration as well as similes. Well done Zoe.
Zoe,
You have written a lovely poem - well done!
Michelle (Tom's Mum)
Hi Zoe,
I am a teacher in America and I wanted to tell you how much I loved your descriptive poems. They were outstanding! Keep on writing!
Mrs. Hartman
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